In which I share something I am not proud of

I feel like writing. You know, just splatting words down on a page and hoping something comes out beautiful like a Jackson Pollock painting.

I am afraid to write sometimes.  I fear that my medium, my words, will get all jumbled up. I’ll use the  wrong colors in all the wrong places. My attempts will be big and awkward and embarrassing. I will make a mess and not a masterpiece.
You know what? That is how we learn. Each mistake pushes us a tiny bit further. There is nothing shameful about bad writing. It is just a sign that you are trying hard (maybe too hard). So here it is: some words splattered around. Something that needs editing and developing. Something that may just end up all together in the trash can. Something I am not quite all the way proud of.
BOOM:
 
I rose with the sun but she was already awake.  I imagined that it was Mums who brought the day again. Every morning as I was fighting consciousness, my Mums would slip out into the horrible darkness. Hours later I would wake up again, this time for reals. A few rays of light would steal through our dirty windows just as my Mums returned, all sweaty smiley.
 
I had seen her run sometimes, so so fast. She was the only one fast enough to run the distance each morning. Out of our crumbling neighborhood. Past my half broken school. All the way to somewhere where it was a little less cold and a little less angry. She would find the sun sleeping there. She would smile, kiss his cheek, and tell him it that it really was time to get out of bed.
 
Even on those days when we stayed up late, working on homework or chatting about the boy who gave me a flower, my Mums was always up to fetch the sun in the morning.
 
 I imagined that the sun rolled back in the sky and begged for five more minutes. Sometimes he probably didn’t want to wake up at all. Who would want to shine down on such a cruel world? Mums could coax him though. Even on the most horrible of days. She always had the perfect words spoken with a certain softness that made the most unbelievable things make sense and the most ridiculous jokes sound almost kind of funny.
 
No one knew how important she was. Her dad who kicked her out because she was too tall to belong in his church (leastways that is why she told me he gave her the boot, I never did quite believe that story). The guys she dated, one after one, they didn’t know how important she was. Or perhaps they didn’t like how she kissed the sun. My teachers complained cause she couldn’t give me what I needed to succeed. I needed books and tutors and something called “intervention”.
 
“What is intervention Mums?”
 
“It is when you don’t fit inside their underfunded boxes because your eyes are too bright. So they try to buy another box for you, but they don’t realize that your eyes are gonna shine outa any box they put you in girl.”
 
It was always that way. The great big world versus mamma and me. Nobody knew how special she was, cept for me and the sun. That’s cause we knew what if felt like to wake up to her smiles.
 
Then she was gone.
 
They told me she was gone forever. That I should just get used to waking up to broken miniblinds instead of mama’s smiles. But I knew they were lying. I knew that somehow, we had still won. All I had to do was look out the window and say a good morning to the bright sleepy sun.

Author: Susanna

I'm Susanna, a 20-year-old Christian girl incorrigibly addicted spontaneous adventures. My first dream was to become a pioneer. Unfortunately, I was born a couple centuries late, so I've decided to read, cook, run, and travel the world until my time machine is finished. You'll mostly likely find me getting into trouble and/or eating licorice. I am currently blogging the misadventures of a middle-school teacher in training. Come join me on my quest to become the next Ms. Frizzle!

4 thoughts on “In which I share something I am not proud of”

  1. Ooh, this is very interesting with the plural mums. I don't see why you shouldn't be proud of it — the premise is fantastic, and i'd love to hear more about it!

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  2. Thanks Alyssa! I am very hesitant to share my writing because I just never think it is good enough and am afraid that people will judge me for my imperfect words. However, I need to learn how to share my words so that I can get feedback and improve. This is a huge hurtle for me and my writing. Thanks so much for your encouragement!

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  3. Wow, that was raw and beautiful, and gosh, I wish I could write like that on my first try. It would take a lot of bravery for me to share my writing without editing; it's already hard enough with editing! Thank you for sharing this, it was wonderful!

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